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Réponse :
One day, RJ. Palacio met a little boy. The little boy had a facial deformity.
→ One day, RJ Palacio met a little boy who had a facial deformity.
She decided to write a book about this very special boy. This very special boy went to school for the very first time at the age of 10.
→ She decided to write a book about this very special boy who when to school for the very first time at the age of 10.
Today, RJ. Palacio often meets young readers.The young readers are always very enthusiastic about Wonder.
→ Today, RJ. Palacio often meets young readers who are always very enthusiastic about Wonder.
She has also started "Be kind" campaigns with primary students. The primary students always have plenty of great ideas.
→ She has also started "Be kind" campaigns with primary students who always have plenty of great ideas.
Explications :
L'utilisation de "who" ( qui ) permet d'éviter les répétitions.
Un jour, RJ. Palacio a rencontré un petit garçon. Le petit garçon avait une malformation faciale.
→ Un jour, RJ Palacio a rencontré un petit garçon qui avait une malformation faciale.
